Ọ̀rọ̀:Zainab Ashadu
Subject of page
[àtúnṣe àmìọ̀rọ̀]The subject is a person's biography but the content is mainly about her business. The concern is that the page is promotional and needs to be encyclopedic if the subject is notable. Please note the following:
- There is no Wikidata item for the subject, the company, and the sourced reference.
- The sole reference, African Business Central is an online magazine, not clear how it obtains the information it publishes - so is perhaps not a reliable second- or third-party source?
- The page lacks basic information about the subject (date of birth, place of birth, education...).
- The page needs formatting (section headings) and categories.
Please note that I don't read or write Èdè Yorùbá. I am alerting User:Nurudlight (the page creator and main contributor), and User:T Cells (a YO WP administrator who added the referenced content) to help improve the page on the issues raised here. -- Deborahjay (ọ̀rọ̀) 09:55, 14 Oṣù Kẹ̀sán 2018 (UTC)
- Comment I apologize for the late response Deborahjay, I have been busy lately. Really the article is promotional but Nurudlight is a new editor, and I don't want to discourage them by deleting their first article. I'll review in detail later this week and help them to rewrite it as the subject appears to be notable. Regards. T Cells (talk · contribs · email) 14:52, 14 Oṣù Kẹ̀sán 2018 (UTC)
- I entirely agree with and thank you for your approach, T. The points detailed above are my contribution to helping develop the page. I'll follow the page and add future suggestions for categories. -- Deborahjay (ọ̀rọ̀) 08:47, 15 Oṣù Kẹ̀sán 2018 (UTC)